The image below shows clearly how I have altered my contents page after receiving all of my feedback. I decided to keep the layout the same as that in my rough cut as it received many positive comments during the feedback stage. I have carried through the arrow head design as this will help to strengthen my brand identity. It looks very modern and stylish and also links to the music genre. Additionally, I decided to section the individual stories as I had negative comments about the readability of the text. I did this my placing the headers in a black text box and colouring the writing white.
I decided to swap the social media logo image as I wanted more available sites for my audience to follow the magazine on (6 as opposed to 4). Furthermore, I kept the dotted black line separation bars as I think this looks very effective and visually satisfying. With regards to the layout of this page, I have ensured that once I insert my image, none of the text will overlap the photo. This will make the page look more professional overall.